I totally love your work, you know I do, but some things on this game are off..
for instance, why is the half of the screen just menu ?! I don't get it and it's distracting to read something on the panel to the right, when the action is on the left side of the screen.. this, in a way, is ruining the experience, because it's distracting..
scenes are great, but the sounds of blowjob, cumming and pounding ass are too quiet.. but I love options for talking during scenes.. it open ups more opportunities to build some kind of relationship or trust/distrust between characters.. having the option for good and bad response would be great, but that's your call.. right now the options are pretty blunt, but I trust in your skills, you'll made them great.. oh, and also the sounds of cum or pounding ass are too quite..
and I like that characters have some sort of unique behavior, but when it comes to the action, they all act the same :/ I was really perplexed by Jinx, she striked me like not much talk, more action, but when we started, she talked and talked and bragged and dominated, I totally didn't expect this behavior from previous talk with her, it was weird.. I guessed her would be like natural domina, like here's my tool, you know what to do, just do it and thank me afterward.., but honestly, I don't want to sound like I complain, just letting some thoughts out of the system.. btw: I was really disappointed, that she doesn't make the MC swallow that cum from condom, that was missed opportunity :)
one thing I have to complained about though, there's way too many text.. it's more texts then scenes, total opposite of the MANTIS and if this game wasn't yours, I would quit it after a few texts, but it's yours, so I kept reading and reading, just because I love your work, but it was hard to done it.. I was way too bored to really enjoy the action.. I don't think that much text is needed to explain things, to make scene better or move plot forward.. it's overall a bad design, because game mechanics, scenes and plot should be self explanatory from the actions we are see in the game..
I hope you can do something about that panel and reduce the amount of text.. and I'm really hoping that you finish the MANTIS, because that's the masterpiece for me and I want to see, how things will played out.. I will looking forward for next updates for this game and of course for MANTIS as well :) and sorry for complaining, don't get me wrong, I still love it, but these things bothers me about the porn games overall, so I better to write them down as constructive critique, but it's up to you, what you will do about it..