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Excellent piece of writing NiiChan. Although I've felt my share of frustration at how slow and passive the MC has been at times. But you're able to convey the essence of the characters with just a few lines. And the chapter with Emma's past ... damn that hit me in the feels. Fantastic piece of work all round. Can't wait for the next instalment.

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The MC is actually intended to have that kind of personality. You'll find him dense most of the time, but he gets things done anyway. XD

His type works best on these kinds of stories.