Wow, the presentation on this was spectacular! Please, let me audition for the real world version of this. Also release that initial song with full vocals! The timing on the music, pacing of the story, and overall execution were absolutely amazing. If you had made some minor improvements or added to the combat system, I think you could have gotten perfect scores across the board.
Haven't played all the entries yet, but this is really the one to beat so far! Thanks for submitting such a great entry!