So I'm actually just going to build my comment as a sort of live reaction, with a summary on the bottom!
So first off this music and art is FANTASTIC!!! It sets the mood really well to not too horrifying but definitely creepy. This seems like it'll be a puzzle game? I'm excited to show my girlfriend if it is!
One bug that's very minor but when you examine the lamps after the houses they disappear while the text runs (unsure if that's intentional as the others don't but it IS a horror game!
I really enjoy how you've structured this, the poems fit really well and are understandable enough to make it work!
This was an incredible game!! This was a really solid short game and you should be proud!! I encountered no bugs except what I mentioned above and the music and graphics were incredible! You should be really proud. I see that this was submitted really close to the deadline and you should be incredibly proud of making it!! I hope us game devs can all support each other!