This was very cute! I love the characters and the dialogue - I also loved flirting with Shiori~
It could certainly benefit from some fleshing out, but I can understand that not being here yet, what with how many different things exist. I wasn't able to explore the forest too much xD (I might try it again later), but the ending was quite the twist and it's clear that the choice you made at your coming of age ceremony will have greater impact on the rest of the game in the future. I decided to apprentice as a farmer xD (though I only got a lukewarm version of that ending)
This was my favourite line! https://imgur.com/MOPcv5Q But then, I am a sucker for tongue in check 4th wall breaking text.
Congrats on finishing and submitting your demo!