This was a well done entry! Atmospheric, engaging writing, and well done cutscenes. Really nice work! Interesting mechanics, good dialogue, I was NOT expecting that in the Foyer. Wow, very cool. :)
I'd change the text sounds to be every 3rd letter or so, or to be quieter. It did become a little distracting because of how immersive the rest of the game was.
There were a few errors in the text, 1 spelling error and 1 missing word, in the foyer area.
The battle tutorial had a word or two cut off because the text box was not big enough.
Maybe change the names of the buttons on the keyboard - they were to scrunched in to know what you were changing on the button common events.
Great job introducing, then ramping up into exploration mode, adding in on map battles and explaining everything thoroughly. Overall, an enjoyable game - nice job!