Nice! Really happy you liked it.
I had a couple people tell me the character "interruptions" were too fast. I made them a little longer to give people time to read them, but I guess they're still too short. I'll make sure to revise them on another update soon.
The character portraits showing some of the effects happening on-screen is definitely something I'll be adding for the next chap!
Thanks for the feedback, hope to see you for the final entry soon!