The adventure with Antonia and Victor was fun, they had really good chemistry. However, you could have taken some of the dialogue bit more seriously, because it is jarring in some places. I think moments of comedy should be fewer but you shouldn't get rid of them completely, it adds to the charm of the game. The dialogue was a bit rough in some places so maybe you could proofread some of it unless English your first language.
Overall, it was a pretty solid game despite it being your first game.
There was a visual bug I found those.
