This is excellent! Scariest game of the jam by a long shot. The art is gorgeous--you have some really nice charcoal/watercolor brushes/shaders (or was it actual analog art!). The black and white is just great for capturing that Golden Age sci-fi feel. The progression of the game works really well--each time you think it's over something even scarier happens. I just have mixed feelings about making an adaptation of a copyrighted work.
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Most of the backgrounds are actually just simple 3D backgrounds that were run through a filter and touched up in Photoshop. I'm actually surprised that people like them so much. :)
And yes, I admit that I had some conflicted feelings about adapting this story as well. It's a bit of a gray area since the magazine issue the story was originally published in is publicly available on archive.org.