I really enjoyed the reading! It has this cute style that really made you feel like in a visual novel, but the different tone and set up made me also dig into the world that's presented. Just wish there was more to it, but! It's more than enough for a novel of this duration ^^
My only problem, story-wise, is that Kuro has been under August for a long time. Like, I feel the bond they get to develop makes more sense if they were aquaintances from a long time ago. I would feel pretty like something's wrong if the villain I've known for so long just turned good from one day to another.
For the rest, I'm really hoping to read more of you guys soon enough. It was a blast!