First off, the text before the menu screen was difficult to read. If you plan on doing future updates, I would recommend changing that.
The controls 'Q' and 'E' were a bit weird. Additionally, you had to hold 'D' in order to communicate with the characters. That was a bit annoying. I would have preferred using the mouse. I liked how you only had to hit 'W' once for the bus to accelerate (until braking). Good feature to tell the player when to stop as well. In the first version, it was a bit hard to know when you were supposed to do this.
I did find a pretty significant bug. The second character knocks on the window. The door opens and he enters the bus. After the first set of dialogue, he teleports out of the bus and comes back in.
Some of the dialogue itself was too long as well. I would recommend shorting some of it so the player remains attentive. There were multiple endings, but it seemed like nothing changed. In both endings, you hit the girl and the game is over.
Overall, pretty solid for your first game. Nice j
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