Hey, thanks!
"On the other hand, if you get the inner view for free, it greatly reduces the reward for the obligations of the outer layers. For me, I would prefer having no inner view, but good scenes where the inner obligations are presented."
Yeah, that's definitely a good point. I was thinking about this earlier, and you reminded me of something that I forgot about. In the scenes where the officer inspects the main character's lingerie, I wanted to make it so that she leaves her skirt or shirt off during the whole meeting. She only puts it back on when she leaves the office. So, when she is asking the officer for work or for a pay increase, she has to do it while she is also topless or in her panties. Actually, I can still do that, and it would be like you said, a scene where the inner obligation is presented.
"I know good writing takes time, and you have to find your own balance between programming, writing, and game balancing"
Yeah, it's really true. You know what I find really hard about writing? Programming is something I can do, no matter how I'm feeling. I know what algorithm I want to use, or how I plan to structure some data. But writing is something that I have to be in the right mood for. If I'm distracted or stressed out or not in a good mood, it's very hard to write a scene with any feeling in it, lol. Therefore, whenever I'm struck with inspiration or the mood to write, I always try to take advantage of it.