First of all, I would really like to say that you've made an amazing job! It looks like it is going to be VN with one of the best plots - it grabs the player really quickly and it's just impossible to put it down. Characters are unique and well written. Speaking about the visuals, I can describe them with only one word and that's - perfect.
Such an excellent beginning! Looking forward to the next update!
Hope everything will be alright and you'll be able to finish this masterpiece!