Looks like an interesting game, but I want to ask why can't the only female RO be romanced by a male MC? I mean, you only have 3 RO's.
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Velia being a black lesbian is an important part of her character and the struggles she goes through living in a small town, and while we would love to have more RO’s, this is our first attempt at coding anything similar to this so we’re starting out small. I understand the frustration but there isn’t a lack of interactive fiction out there with female RO’s who can be romanced by Male MC’s :)
Ah okay, I can understand if it's an important part of her character. Maybe you could add a platonic route at the final version of the game, that is, once you're more used to writing interactive fiction. But, in the end, it's your story, you're the author and so it's your choice. Apart from that, I really like the plot and wish you the best of luck.