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What do you mean by reuse every 10 seconds? And thanks!

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the art and the text 

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I believe he's refering to the reuse of sprites/scenes, visual novels require a couple of variations of a character to express emotions, intent, comic relief. and a couple other details that are important in telling a story. If ya want me to go through the VN with you in regards to what is good and what could be changed. I'd be happy to, Message me on discord @GalacticBee#6774 

I will admit that sprites and scenes have been reused. I was on a low budget and I hired someone else to do the sprites. And I would gladly listen to further comments on the visual novel, as I am still learning myself.

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A lot of the problems I felt with the visual novel related to the dialog/text. it felt very bland, some things felt too direct. where as others didn't give enough information to feel invested in the scene