I didn't expect to like this.. it's very short but I liked it. Choosing their body parts everytime broke the immersion for me a bit but I understand the need for that. I loved Roan so much, his commanding tone and how he expects to be answered, his lines, personality.. I loved it.
Bailey, is more on the gentle side but I can picture him as a gentle big man. He was sweet. I did another playthrough just for him.
Lumi.. was totally not my type at all lol. I stopped when he told me to take "charge" in dance.
As for the Marquessa, sorry but I really didn't like her. She was too forced & pushy regardless of sexual orientation. I just ignored her parts.
But overall this could be made to a much longer thing. The story was actually interesting despite being short. And the romance isn't bad.