really loved this new episode! lol "you just dropped your brothers and sisters" you had me dying laughing with tears with all the comedy and stuff, keep it up!
damn dude, whats your problem, if you don't like other peoples stories and the work they put into it, THEN MAKE YOUR OWN and see if you can do what others can do,SMH your one of the people that likes to things for granted and probably a person that can't let others have nice things, i dare you to join the military and see how often you get time to have personal time and see if you'll take things for granted again
funny you say i served 3 yrs in military,a bit of coincidene? And i have exactly no problem with some story which is written nicely,bit see the chapter 0 and chapter 1 i felt like playing two different avn,one filled with love,desires, thrill, vengeance,rape in fantasy, pregnancy,a happy family, good looking character and all,and in second half i felt a douchebag mc who is jerk and looks like 60 yrs old when he was supposed to be 40 no one loves him(understandable) but missing cuck and NTR tags,forced loli,whoring mc real daughter, prostitutions,whinny mc crying over situation rather than facing,why sell something in form of something else , you could have made an crap story but seriously bro you also could see they are supposed to be two different avn.