Thank you SO MUCH for this review. We've been working really hard to improve our narrative skills and this game is a huge step for us - compared to Freezer Pops, our first novel. Regarding the character development and plot pacing, this was a conscious choice. I'm sure we'll be able to work better on these topics in our next novels. For this project, we wanted to learn how to work with a specific narrative design pattern and how to write a modular story.
Last but not least, I'm not used to some terms you mentioned, I know MC is Main Character, but what does mean AO perspective? Could you enlighten me, please? And feel free to join our Discord or inbox me, we really want to have game testers with criticism skills. This helps us a lot to improve our games.