I liked the story, but there was a lot of click-thru that didn't have choice (just have to click to read the next paragraph). I would prefer to only click when there is a choice.
Ahh that's great advice! Some of the click throughs were deliberate to break up the narrative -> given the word limit, I was thinking of going for a more terse, choppy feel. But yes! I'll definitely keep that in mind next time around, thank you for playing through!
