I love the artstyle and the music, it feels really satisfying. Too much text tho, it feels like you are trying to teach a player everything about the game at the very beginning, this can be very overwhelming. The storytelling feels good, the sound of the "bad man" speaking is breaking my ears tho... When the chess part started i couldn't understand how to plan the tactics cus there are no health meters on enemies so they just encercled me and i died... I love the presentation and the lore here, overall, good job!