oh yeah defo it needs more variation, it was originally supposed to end after the second part for the flute (when the backing violins, cellos and basses come in) but then i realized i wouldn't have time to make another track so i just decided to extend it with the violin. Maybe i could've added some orchestral drums at some point to add a bit more variety but i feared it would be really weird for them to just start at the violins part and then the track just end.
Also thanks for commenting about the mix! As a sound engineer student I appreciate the recognition for the extra 2~3 hours the mixing and (light) mastering took... <3
oh and yeah defo that violin needs a bit of a revision, the flute too. some flute notes just come outside of the beat in a very not cool way, and i didn't catch it when working on it... that flute vst sounds great but it's kinda random attack make it a bitch to work with, still can't ask for it to be perfect since it was free...
also one last thing, i had already listened to your submission and it's great i love it !
tysm and keep up with making banger music too ^^ !!