Well, do you really need more comments singing your praises? ;-P
The good:
- It looks and sounds great. I like how the music speeds up as the timer runs low.
- I like how you get to unlock the rules two pages at a time, and work your way forward.
- It's a fun parody that stands on its own legs.
The bad:
- I'd really like to know what the correct choice would have been in the last form of each run before I lose.
- Maybe a table of contents for the rule book would be nice.
- I think a red cross or circle around the offending entry would be nicer than having a yellow background for the entry.
- I think the "roll the dice" theme wasn't very relevant to the game. Yes, TTRPGS often let you generate stats via dice, but they could just as well have been generated via point-buy or drawn from a hat or any other way. The way the numbers are generated is irrelevant to the gameplay, and in fact, if you choose to generate stats in DnD, for instance, those stats stand and are not affected by further rules. You cannot roll illegal stats afaik.
Edit: I would have liked a special sound effect if we get +10 vs +5 added to the clock.
Edit 2: I think I beat the game, I got to rule 8, "the last one", but then my game started to freeze and I had to stop. I don't know whether the game actually ends or if it continues infinitely, but I hope there's a victory condition for the "story mode".
You already know you made a great game from all the other comments. But yes. You made a great game. Full marks!
Thanks for participating and I hope we'll see you again next year!