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Since others said ill try to not repeat myself, i want to, if possible, give some feedback on what i think it's bad.

As others said, the gameplay is boring and the player doesn't have much agency on what happens, although with that Twist , i guess it's intentional, but it would have been good if the minigame for the plot was a little more engaging and also had some relation with the twist.

Talking about the twist * Spoilers*:




I think if instead of a pc with a game deciding your life (which is my interpretation of the story), it was maybe some kind of "evil corporation" forcing you to get results or something, something like playing a casino-like  game and your "boss" or "kidnapper" threatened to kill you if you got the "wrong dice".

Also i think it's strange that you are just playing a pc game about collecting dices but a lady says if you don't get a good dices she kills you.

But overall the idea it's pretty interesting, also, the sprites and their "effects" (rotation, sprite zoom in-out, etc...) are pretty good and well done, though the sprites themselves could get improved, hope you work a little bit that area, cause u have potential! Overall hope you can make better makes in the future with this feedback! GL bro :)

Thank you for playing my game!

Yeah, I agree that there could be a combination of mini-game and story that meshed together better. Your idea is pretty good!

My original idea was that you were playing as a kid staying up late, with you mother telling you to go to bed. And the game was about getting to the next level in an MMO before she came in to pull the plug on your computer. This wasn’t dramatic enough, so I changed it to what the game is now. I think I should have thought it through even more, but I still think this is better than my original idea. But at least you now know why there is an energy drink next to the computer ;)

I’m glad you noticed the sprite effects, as I spent too much time on them. What can I say? I’m glad we’re learning about linear interpolation and sine curves in my university courses courses haha.

Again: Thank you for playing and giving me advice about how the game could be improved.

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Cool Man! Though personally i don't think the mom finding you late idea was that bad, you could make it like a horror game where your mother looks like a demon or has red eyes or something and says she is gonna "punish" you, whatever that means, even though that seems like a normal situation, it's quite unexpected. Good luck in future jams!!