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I had really big expectations for the game. But I really didn't like it. The writing was not very fluent and interesting. The dialogs between the characters were way too long and unnecessary. The love interests were not interesting at all. Lincoln is a man type of man. Rude, covered with tattoos, broken inside, daddy issues. So classic, such a big cliché. Abel on the contrary, the wise and caring one, a family man. The bringing back Noah thingy was so unnecessary and didn't contribute to the story. If there is a story. No chapters are adding something to the other one. It's so superficial. There is seemingly nothing going on, but the crew is always after something. Sometimes I feel like It's just a wattpad story. I didn't want to be cruel or upset the writers. These are all my honest reviews, I'm sorry.

Note: I don't really care the readers opinions tho  as IT IS NORMAL FOR OTHER PEOPLE NOT TO LIKE WHAT YOU LIKE. So might as well continue screaming with your burned ass in replies. 

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Tsk, tsk, dont let toxic People get under your skin you have every right to your opinion

I love Pixelberry's books this one is good and were left on a cliff hanger not knowing when chapter 12 comes out I've been waiting for it we are Pixelberry's fans I agree we need chapter 12 though

You can find the date which they will return with chapter 12 on their tumblr page c;

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Tbh: You have the right to not like it. I disagree about the whole I don't like the Love interests because their cliches.

DO you know how many LIs in choices and other apps are cliches? Sometimes it takes different types of writing to cover up how much a Cliche most characters can be. What I'm saying is? Hate the characters but don't be naive and hate them because their cliches when many LIs are cliches in themselves.

I feel you didn't you really read that much of the story give a decent hate review on it. 


With not understanding the group goals are.

Then them bringing back old stuff makes it pretty that this is a sequel to both book 1 & 2. You can't do a sequel without having the past characters return even Noah.


I'm be honest it took me some time to get into the story myself so I'm not even mad you dislike it.

I just didn't like your points on hating the characters for being cliches and hating  returning characters.