This is fun idea, I genuinely like it! For constructive criticism, I think you should take some time on the presentation before you submit, and I'd be happy to help you out with that if you want. Just private message me on anything! I'm making a submission of my own, and I want to help out with a complete game so I can make my own even better (we are competitors, of course!).
Let me know! I'd love to help you out any time, even today. And no, I don't want any money!