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BlackRoseMii2 years ago(+1)

I really like the story and art and while I've never actually played this kind of genre, it was a new experience for me. 

However, breaking the 4th wall (such as telling you you did a good job solving a puzzle), also broke the immersion of the story a little bit. It would be great if the transition between story and gameplay was more subtle. Also, some of the items in the picture were really hard to see, maybe changing the contrast would help a little.

In conclusion, the game does have potential to be an interesting novel, if the transitions would be tweaked a little.

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CCCreations2 years ago

thank you for playing!! I do hope you enjoyed yourself! I admit this was a challenge for me as I've never done anything like this before, so it was a huge learning experience and personal achievement!

I will look into how to soften the transitions more, thank you for that feedback! The art I left as intended by the wonderful artists that did them though, I did in some cases ask them to make the linework in some images more pronounced, while in others to blur the linework more so that things weren't too obvious. But as it's a learning experience, going forward I know exactly what to ask of anyone doing work for this type of project again😊. 

I thank you so much for your feedback and the time you took, not only to play my game but to leave some things for me to look at better in the polish phase! I hope you'll try it again once it's completely finished to see the improvements!!!

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