Yeah, I expect overlooked issues as a normal part of game jams! I can say certainly nothing broke, I played it three times and had no problems, so you're gold there!
That's great to hear! Visual novels/wordy games are my fav. I liked the characters and wanted to know more about their time together. My favorite parts are when I was reading about the past but certain things were scribbled out cause memory woes. I can imagine the slow burn buildup with more scenes being so nice to read. When you expand on this, I'd love to give it another go!