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I love this story and the work on it, but I have discovered that for a lot of adult VNs that have the taboo motif (scenarios/storyline) that it takes what seems like FOREVER to finally see the MC have sex with a family member.  I see this when we are on now Chapter 11 of this VN. I don't mean that the storytellers should rush into it in chapter 1, but REALLY?, eleven chapters in and NOW we finally have sex with one of the aunts. 

It's funny, I only bring this up because the MC has had sex with everyone else in the town except those he's supposed to have sex with. I understand the buildup, but come on.

Don't get me wrong, I loved the scene with Liz and it was great that it lasted as long as it did, but I feel that it could have happened back in Chapter 9 or even 10 when he was giving her the massage, or that an opportunity has presented itself to the MC with the titular character on more than one occasion.

Hopefully, we'll see the MC connect with others sooner rather than later. Just being observant and want to see the story progress a little quicker and not drag out so much.

Otherwise, as always, great work in storytelling and artwork. Looking forward to more chapters in the future.

I thought it was just me waiting for Godot, but you are right. It's a looooong time getting to some 'marriage is nice but incest is best' time! Those sexy aunts are so frustrating, particularly given he is such a stud.