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I love this story and the work on it, but I have discovered that for a lot of adult VNs that have the taboo motif (scenarios/storyline) that it takes what seems like FOREVER to finally see the MC have sex with a family member.  I see this when we are on now Chapter 11 of this VN. I don't mean that the storytellers should rush into it in chapter 1, but REALLY?, eleven chapters in and the most that the MC has done is cop a feel and gotten a kiss?   

It's funny, I only bring this up because the MC has had sex with a cop, an Aunt's co-worker, a store clerk and hotel manager but not those he's supposed to have sex with. I understand the buildup, but come on, by now he should of at least hooked up with one of the cousins or the aunt. Just sayin'.

Don't get me wrong, I loved the story and artwork, but I don't get the dragging out the anticipation. Just my opinion.

Hopefully, we'll see the MC connect with the others sooner rather than later. Just being observant and want to see the story progress a little quicker and not drag out so much.

Otherwise, as always, great work in storytelling and artwork. Looking forward to more chapters in the future.