Watched a friend play this! I was excited to see a lead character who doesn't fit into the usual model for main characters, so thanks for that! She's very cute, especially in the last illustration.
As for the game itself, I wanted to enjoy it more than I did. It's clear you have a very strong grasp on how RPGmaker works and how to build the structure of a game - presentation was good, everything worked, the graphics matched, the mapping was nice - but the story delivery was missing a strong hook to really hold the player's (and viewers!) attention.
All in all though, good work. It's a cut above a lot of the other games I've seen and it's a shame it doesn't have more comments or attention. Keep up the good work and really focus on pacing, story delivery, and character going forward.