First impressions pretty good, nice art and an interesting world which would hook a readers interest pretty quickly.
Few things I noticed though is not too far into reading there were grammar errors popping up, first one I noticed was talking to the depressed patient near the start. Aside from these small things though the writing in general is good. 
This same scene was a bit confusing though, the woman's face is horribly disfigured but the first lines of text state that she looks quite healthy, although very sad. Then the topic stays on the mental issues without any character or narrative noticing her mutated face. Though this is just a first impression and for all I know there's a reason for that and it is intentional.
Those were the only things I could think to point out early on, other than that this is a very interesting game so far.
What's that? I posted actual feedback and not a self promo video? that's wild right?