Your art is as amazing as always. Not a big fan of the navigation style on this one; side-scrolling through the pictures becomes tedious when it comes to just moving filters over them, and the transition between slides is not quite as smooth as it should be. The images would work better in a more standard web-comic format, IMO.
Also, was there a PoV shift in the middle of the story? In the beginning it seemed like we were following red/blue-haired girl, but by the end we're plushie-girl instead. Just found it confusing, especially with so little dialogue to help the transition.