no problem i just finished read it and i will say i liked it very much, there was a few errors but nothing i cant read and my brain corrects the few mistakes, and a cliff hanger for sure cant wait to see where it goes and how it progresses !!!
glad to hear that you like it. If you have time, you can help us improve the game by sending screenshots of bugs, errors and typos to nuaragames@gmail.com.
i could do one better if that helps because in use *( LINUX MINT 20.3 UMA with WINE layer )* and notepad++ i can go right into the heart of the script and edit at a basic level then zip the edited file and use megasync to send you them if you want my help at that deep'er level