Hello!
I played your game last night on Stream. The character portrait is really nice, and so is the tileset.
I think the biggest problem is that the tutorial front-loads a lot of information that is difficult for players to remember, and the translation needs more work. Sometimes it is difficult to understand what people are talking about and other times it's difficult to take it seriously.
Anyways, you can watch my play through in the video. You can use the chapters to skip to when I begin playing your game.