"She has been taken care of.." "Wha!?!" sorry that part of the dialoge had me laughing my ass off for some reason. Good work! Though I think the MC could stand to be more worried about the whole choker scenario. :)
lol Yes, that was definitely a bit cliche! But it fit so well, too1
And yes, we're changing some things to make her a little more realistic and not so... well, naive.
Thank you for your feedback!
-ataraxic
