Thanks for your thoughts, Indrah. And I do appreciate you streaming this and all of the games so far in the IGMC!
It's a shame you didn't catch the hook or connect with the characters, as it seems others opine that this is the biggest strength of the game (along with the music selection).
I would've loved to have continued so that it wasn't so short, but since development began halfway through the jam, I felt it was better to have a polished 30 minute experience than a 1 hour rushed one. I'm glad you liked the presentation and general direction of the game -- I think with more love and depth it could be something more people might enjoy.
Good luck in the contest and I look forward to catching you in future streams!