I love the artwork and concept and enjoyed it so far so I don't want what I'm going to say to be taken the wrong way.
I found the story a little difficult to read and stay grounded/immersed in as the characters act and talk rather unrealistically. No matter how fantastical you make your story you MUST always have small amount of realism to help ground the reader in the story.
The MC is the best example because this is an individual who (I presume) never even considered magic or anthropomorphs to be real but despite this reality being shattered he just immediately accepts it without question, argument or questioning whether or not he is going crazy and seeing things.
Anyway those are just my thoughts, hope they help in some way. Keep up the good work