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I love the artwork and concept and enjoyed it so far so I don't want what I'm going to say to be taken the wrong way.

I found the story a little difficult to read and stay grounded/immersed in as the characters act and talk rather unrealistically. No matter how fantastical you make your story you MUST always have small amount of realism to help ground the reader in the story.

The MC is the best example because this is an individual who (I presume) never even considered magic or anthropomorphs to be real but despite this reality being shattered he just immediately accepts it without question, argument or questioning whether or not he is going crazy and seeing things.

Anyway those are just my thoughts, hope they help in some way. Keep up the good work

Hey, thanks for the feedback!

It does help actually, I was wondering how some things I was laying foundation for were working out.

My honest answer for this is that while I can't get into the why of Fynn (MC) dropping most of his hesitancy to accept what is happening almost immediately without going into spoilers, there's a reason but it's coming later on and is related to his entire journey as a character in a sense.

Fynn isn't entirely a reliable narrator, and there are instances of him 'lying by omission' already that have or will come up.

I have put hints in for it as well. I can understand it's sort of jarring though so maybe when I work through the sprite changes with my new artist I will go through and work on adding more things in.

One of the reasons has to do with the MC's past that come into play in the chapter currently only available to Patrons, which will be going public in a few weeks' time!

I will try to look at and adjust some of the dialogue to sound more natural as well, whenever I get the time.

I'm putting a spoilery thing at the bottom, so otherwise thank you for reading and I hope you'll keep checking out Wayfinder!


A bit spoilerey next, so be warned.

As far as the other characters, I will also say they're sort of all putting on a facade of sorts for Fynn (except Tucker, but I have plans for him too) and in Act 2 that veil is going to start to drop.

Some people have ulterior motives and some are just kind.

Thanks for the perspective, it definitely helped and I look forward to the next update