Really enjoyed the update!
I like sombra's character arc of "not knowing how to deal with positive emotions", especially romance.
Having said that, I think it went too straight to sex too quickly both times -- what I mean is that I think a scene of the MC just hanging out in the park or something trying to "teach" her romance would feel more natural and funny/wholesome than just sex -> foreplay sex, which got tiring to me in terms of pacing I think.
I'm excited for future updates!