Okay, I wasn't trying to be sarcastic, but I did get upset when you said my artwork needed improvement when that was actually kind of my first-time drawing gacha art. ╯︿╰
Im sorry but Im not gonna try and sugarcoat this, if it sounds harsh Im sorry. It does look bad, especially since theres alot of shadings and light from it. but Im not saying this to make you quit art, its to just say that theres still alot to go, and kinda insulting someones other art for looking at what it is? its kinda sad.