The Good: The text was descriptive, and the effect of "hungry" at one part was a cool addition, especially since it wasn't overused. The ability to go back was also nice so that I could more easily go through to see how other options would turn out. I also found the "simplisafe" endings amusing.
The Not-So-Good: Some parts were confusing, and I think maybe glitched. After opening the backpack, it starts talking about things as if they were previously mentioned even though they weren't. The overall story was also confusing, as a lot of things that happened seemed very random and out of place. It also needs quite a bit of proof-reading.