Post by KV_Kingdom in Secret Dream jam comments

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Things I liked:

Things I didn’t like:

Time resets make sense at first - MC dies, then repeats until they figure out how to avoid it - but later the resets don’t follow this pattern and it’s not clear why a reset occurs
Talking to everyone in the room is a simple enough, but the dialog is so bland that it just seems like padding more than giving insight into the characters or advancing the story
Grammar issues make it hard to follow the story
A scene late in the game fails to fade in, so I couldn’t get to the ending

This seems like a good foundation for a story-based game; it just needs some further refinement to really shine.

Thank you for the review.

I really appreciate the feedback, I will improve it in the next project.

For a black screen at the end of the game, I have already fixed it.

But I can't send the updated game because the game jam activity is not over yet.

Thanks for playing.