I really loved this game. I think it is a very good entry for this jam. The twist gives it a different and original vibe, I wasn't expecting it. Controls are on point, they feel polished and the pressure is there all the time.
I think that with more care into the level design and design of the world itself (there was no justification or interconnection between elements) and more time to develop the game, it could be an amazing game by itself. Also, a little hint (on the picture of the entry, for example) that there will be a dark twist on this game would help players to know that something it is going to happen; and you will attract people who want to play this specific type of game.
Good job!