Nice game! Here are the answers to the 4 questions in the description:
- The VN was actually pretty good! It had a good hook and while it took me a while after this initial hook to be fully immersed in it again (probably around chapter 3, kinda zoned out on most of Chapter 2), the story really gets better as it progresses.
- So far, I actually quite like how Theodore is written. Vicky is also a pretty good character and her scenes are amongst the highlights of the game (especially at the end of Chapter 4)
- I think there isn't really a lot to improve on with the formula you're using. The most important thing in a VN (especially a kinetic one) is its story, and so far it's definitely building up to something great.
- HOW COULD I NOT WITH THAT CLIFFHANGER AAAAA (that means yes ^^)