Visual novels are pretty hard to give feedback on, since 90% of it is pure plot development which gets pretty subjective to judge. It constantly made me think of this though. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I-OOpZitfd0
The detective got the ranting internal monologue down right, I have to say.
Could use music but you probably know that. When the dialogue describes some sounds, it would be good to hear. I assume the art is mostly placeholder. Margot’s sketch is in a completely different style and size. Honestly the tiny Margo beside the giant Scott is just hilarious. The profile options are nice.