Something that bugs me.. is no Itch tier.. if you meet the minimum donation, itch treats you like you own the game, but Devs on this site don't. I get that the biggest donation should come first .. but itch donators are treated like 'public'. That's a bit too far the other way IMHO.
Caribdis is a *very* talented character writer.. but as for dialogue, employs enough blasphemy to choke a donkey.. aside from my other concerns it's just sloppy dialogue writing.
I have a lot of praise for what Caribdis has done.. this game (Eternum) has pushed the boundaries of what a ren'py game can be. And as I stated.. their character writing for this game and their previous game is of a high professional quality. Plot writing too and length are; superb.
I'm really enjoying Eternum and its faceted enthralling world ..but.. one day after Eternum is done.. I'd love to see a sequel to OIALT.
Thank you Caribdis for all the work you and your team have put in.