I think the game is great! I like the story and characters! I will voice one critique which is with the writing of the mc.
I played male and female for it to compare, and I did notice that rather than leaning for a more gender neutral mc/mc interactions. It does feel like you've written this only with a female mc or an mc who only has female parts in mind which does kinda take from the experience if you're cis male or a noncis female player (especially for the nsfw scene). Some fixes for this could simply some slight changes to dialogue. Like in the nsfw scene instead of 'cum on my dick' it could be 'cum on me baby' another alteration could be adding a dress 'cool' option along with cute. These are just some suggestions to give it more of an inclusive feel for all genders/sexes! It's all good if you don't want to make changes like that, these are just some suggestions/critiques! Great vn other than that, I really enjoyed it.