I thoroughly enjoy your sense of humour, that most of the girls seem different from each other and that all the amazing renders. The story is pretty good and the writing is also pretty good! Cheers to that.
One thing that truly gets to me, and which can't be fixed now, is that the girls labia are so low down/tilted back. Most women, when standing straight up and not pelvic tilting backwards to make their ass look better, have visible labia. Having it so low sometimes makes the models like like mannequins. It almost seems like their labia are where their vaginal opening should be...
That's my only gripe. I did enjoy the ability to change views of your game OIALT but understand that takes a lot of time to do. And these models are much more realistic looking.
My other thought (sorry for such a long rambling mess), is that it'd be nice to see cum stay on the girls for a bit if interrupted before cleaning up or making clothing a bit cum stained.