It's pretty atmospheric and serene. I also love how the sky counterfeits each narrators' problems, subtlely connects the people below the same sky... (or is it only one person view? One way or another, it works).
Thank you!! Yes, it's several people. I tried to show it by adding birds to the transition screen, but in the end, it's just an artistic choice. If you want to read it as one character, you're welcome to!