It’s interesting trying to integrate an entire micro-RPG alongside an adventure, and it’s amazing you were able to do it at half the Jam’s word limit. Clarity of writing, instruction, and layout exist on both pages of the submission. You also offer some charming character options, helped by the great pixel art (I’m quite a fan of Chargers). The referee’s page offers a lot of small yet useful tools to flesh out the adventure, and enables solo play (which is pretty cool).
Looking through the ideas, I’d love to have seen some more details (especially since you had the room to spare). Entities like Morok, the various law enforcement factions (Pavarti-Patriachat’s Pogo-Police, the Zavron Empire Guards, and the Dumb Cowboy Sheriff), and Poppa-Nobi merely inspire. If you ever revise this adventure or use similar ideas, consider expanding on those.
Overall, I’m impressed with the entire submission’s quality, utility, and versatility, and I am left wanting more.