I also got to play this game for judging as it was a finalist. Here are my thoughts on the game.
Overall I felt this was a very well done game. It is well polished and plays well. My only gripe is with the time mechanic as I didn't feel it really added anything to the game in the end. I do think if you had a longer game it may have been more evident but a short jam game like this I didn't feel I really got to see all the benefits and disadvantages of it well so it felt a little forced instead.
Outside of that little quibble I had no other suggestions on things to fix. I ran out of time right when I got to the fight with Ouroborus, and that was only because I rushed to it late realizing I had 5 minutes left.